rate_review Reviews

Sweet...just like candy!!!!!

LOL, she needs to be more specific. Liked it very much,

a few mistakes, but other than that, this was very very cute

That was very sweet and cute.

this is soooooo cute

very cute misunderstanding. It's interesting how Severus deals with the pregnancy and his family--very long-suffering. It might help to rework the candy conversation a bit? I had to think for a while before being comfortable with the conversation, since most people would say they wanted chocolate, a candy bar, or a Snickers instead of candy if they wanted a Snickers bar. Maybe a more candy-ish candy like Starburst (or the British equivalent)? Smarties maybe? They're rather M&Mish type candies in British commonwealth countries.

LMAO! That was a pip! Excellent work and I can't wait to read more of your writing in the future!