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by Lomonaaeren

schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay! A break though with Harry, he now knows he doesn't have to fight alone.
person MiraMira
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, If it's possible to "accio" people, then I wanna accio Draco, dammit. The whole needing to focus on what you're summoning bit would be a piece of cake. X]

And since everyone else is mentioning Gregory in their reviews, I suppose I must too. :P

Here's my Gregory theory: Dearborn set her up. I haven't thought about his motive much since he hates dark lords but loves dark magic, but I think he's getting closer to Draco to be able to better back stab him or use him for something illicit later on. Thus Gregory, while a bitch, is still good, so when she saw Harry her instinct was to protect The Boy Who Lived. It would also explain why, when she saw Draco, she recognized him as Dearborne's only what-do-you-call-it...student assistant trainee person when Dearborne said he never took mentorees. So knowing Draco's past affiliation with voledemort (cuz that's no secret), she assumed that Draco was involved in Dearborne's plot. When she saw Draco and Harry together, she could have just seen Draco as a threat to both herself and Harry and tried to eliminate the threat.

As for the whole matter of her using Dark magic. Meh. Whatever works. If she's a wizard that specializes in hand-to-hand combat then you can hardly count her as "conventional" to begin with. She's also a bit rougher around the edges, so her having a favorite dark spell to use in a pinch (since, let's remember, she WAS grossly outnumbered in this last scene) wouldn't surprise me in the least. In the end though, I'd have to wait for more plot to be revealed to make an assumption about her dark magic usage though.

Let's see....am I forgetting anything? Oh! as for why she didn't tell the other teacher that was with Dearborne when they confronted her about the (planted) evidence she was going through....well. Hell, could be anything from something lame like shock to something a little less lame like the other teacher's in on it too, to something else entirely that we can't see yet. *shrugs*


All-in-all Gregory's still on the good side of the Naughty/Nice list in my books.


*shrugs*
~Miranda

...crap, i didn't mean to write so much on that...
person SP777
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #22...

I liked this 'Draco-gives-Harry-a-piece-of-his-mind' chapter! :-)
I think Harry WILL stop being SO reckless in the future, with
Draco by his side...bout time.

I, also, liked the conversation...or should I say hissing on Draco's
part, while speaking to HArry. :-]

All in all, those two are closer to becoming VERY promising Aurors
in the future. Can't wait to see what happens when they graduate.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Exellent chap. U no your fics would make great movies!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm... after this problem has been - well, not solved :-), I'm musing why Draco hasn't gathered the courage to look at Snape's pensieve. Draco seems to be someone who values information of any kind because it might prove useful, so why doesn't he want to look at it? What does he expect which makes him so hesitant do to it? It seems a little ooc imo. Or maybe I just haven't caught the reason yet.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh! it is about time someone used the accio charm that way!!! i've read so many stories where that would have been totally appropriate but no one used it! well done. and i love how they're getting closer with each encounter.
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh...the plot thickens. What is Gregory all about? Maybe caught up in too much...maybe a spy? Hmmmmm....and things are heating up between Draco and Harry...though at a snail's pace (not insulting your craft...just displaying my exasperation with Harry's obliviousness). Though it's good I care about the characters, yes?
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow cant wait for the next chapter! Great job!
person kinkyfairy33
schedule October 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this is an amazing story that has kept me captivated throughout every chapter! please update soon!
schedule October 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20: I like how they are working things out together.

Chapter 21: Pain to tell Draco when Harry is in trouble? Oh, poor Draco. *snickers* He will never stop feeling that pain.

Now I'm really confused about Gregory....

Thanks for another great chapter.

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