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Ch15: I was getting a little worried there about Draco and his obsession with Harry... That was cute, passing the note in class. *smiles*

Excellent! Draco as possessing friend and maybe with more intimate intention; and Ron with jealously; I loved.

oh my gosh! Just an hour? Yeah, you officially amaze me.

Anyways, great chapter! Draco's just getting more and more ridiculously adorable. How many chapters do plan on this part of the story being...I mean, you said it would go over a few "books" if you will and that this one would be pre-slash, so....how many chapters is this story? Is it going to be divided by year or more according to their relationship?

LOVE IT!
~Miranda

aww that's soo cute! they're getting closer together!

Draco's possessive - that's cute. Your're the master of UST, really - those innocent touches, that they don't realise are already getting them closer... What's happened to Snape's pensieve, by the way?

I thoroughly enjoy the constant updating of your fantastic story ^_^
I stay up late just so I can read it and walk about in zombie haze the next day

Thanks 4 the update! Gr8 chap

about #15...

I never thought I'd lived to see the day that Harry Potter would ACTUALLY
grow balls of steel and stand up for his right to choose AND stand by
those choices.

Because, for some reason, readers/authors are SO stuck on him being the
befuddled young boy, that they forget that he has to eventually grow
up and start being a young man.

I like this young man that I'm seeing.

I, also, liked the confrontation between Harry & Ron, though I hate the
fact Harry had to go to Ron first, but at least, it's out the way.

Now, folks will confuse [or maybe not] Draco's possessive thinking as some
type of Love Confession, when it's not.

I know EXACTLY how it feels to be friends with someone who you consider
larger than life, has more influence than you could ever dream of or just
have an aura about them that makes you proud or special that it is YOU
that they've included in THEIR circle.

I could a have cousin like that who works in Hollywood and has connections
in certain circles. God knows I was awestruck by her. :-)

What else? Oh yeah, this chapter had a feel of something that YOU'VE
experienced yourself at school. Have you?

All in all, you're pulling this off rather nicely. Not bad mah' dear...


PS-I envy your ability to type so fast, I still do 2 fingers. Don't laugh
at me! I'm fast at 2 fingers! Slow at multiples...

correction...

*damn, I hate when I'm tired and try to type something...*

I could a have cousin like that who works in Hollywood and has connections
in certain circles. God knows I was awestruck by her.

I meant, I have a cousin...

Wow...the transition from simple usefulness to friendship for the both of them was soooo smooth...very nice, and totally believeable. Im totally curious about those "deatheaters" too...I wonder what they find out? Can't wait!