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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I say, "Please continue!!!" It was a heck of a one-shot and I hope to see it turn into more. His whispered confession... Her confusion and need... Yes, please add more!! Thanks. HG4eva
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More!
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was lovely, particularly because of the lack of spelling, punctuation and grammar errors! :D The plot was intriguing and not over-used. With the huge box of chocolates, you could add different chapters, detailing other opportunities for our Heads to become better acquainted, depending on the chocolate ingested -- either by one or both. I, for one, like happy endings, though. That may be a problem for you, I don't know. Anyway, thanks for uploading this here! :D
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August 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant! I loved every moment of it. Please continue it!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great story and if you have more bring it on!
Great story and if you have more bring it on!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, are you kidding that this is your first fan fic? Well, let me be the first to sign up as your #1 fan and most loyal reader! Not only was this a great idea for a story line but it was executed fabulously. I'm super hot and bothered but still have a wicked little smile on my face--the perfect ending after a great story! looking forward to more :)
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like to see the next morning. Good job for your first foray into the writing process of the HP world.
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August 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
fun and lovely and begs for a few more chapters.