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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you are evil for the cliffie! LOL Update soon. I bet a cookie that it was ginny that poisoned hermione. She probably sees Hermione as the only thing standing in her way of being Queen of the Wizarding World.
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August 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Evil, evil, evil. Is somebody trying to implicate Snape? Poisoning the girlfriend of a potions master would be a good way to do it, or is Ginny just being a nit again?
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am laughing delightedly at the arrival of Albus to the Wizengamot meeting. I hope there is more to come on the sweeping changes to the justice system in wizarding society.
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August 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love the story. and in this chapter, the ultimate faux pas. ouch.
as for the song, is it by meat loaf? the lyrics lead me to think that i know it, but i don't.
as for the song, is it by meat loaf? the lyrics lead me to think that i know it, but i don't.
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hey there - great story! Your music references are usually beyond me, but here's hoping I'll get one, some day. Today's cadence sounds like it *could* be from Great Balls of Fire by Jerry Lee Louis, but it's probably not.
Anyway, I meant to focus on story praise - I like your plot because it's original, and the method by which HG is managing the Death Eaters is unique. Keep up the good work.
Cheers
CB
Anyway, I meant to focus on story praise - I like your plot because it's original, and the method by which HG is managing the Death Eaters is unique. Keep up the good work.
Cheers
CB
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Me again - Sorry, but I did want to point out that I believe JKR spells Lily with just the one "L" in the middle, and I think you may have spelled it, "Lilly" instead. I feel bad mentioning it, since otherwise your story is beautifully proofed and edited.
Cheers,
CB
Cheers,
CB
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh.... I love cliffies. The plot is thickening nicely. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work.
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Holy CRAP!!!! You can't just leave it there. Please update soon. I'm on pins and needles....
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Four little reviews just to get me alone? What is in place of reviews? Roofies? "Four little roofies just to get me alone. Why didn't you just ask? I'm horny and always have a bone." I should be a song writer. ;-)
I can't believe Severus said Lilly's name! How is he going to dig himself out of that hole? I loved the massage part, though. Oh, to pass out and wake up naked in a studly man's bed getting a massage. If only.
When I was reading the Greyback part, I thought what? Is Mariteri insane? She's going to have Hermione free even him? Has she become one of those author's who is so out of touch with reality and what is believable? But then I read on. Sorry I doubted you for a few seconds there.
I can't believe Severus said Lilly's name! How is he going to dig himself out of that hole? I loved the massage part, though. Oh, to pass out and wake up naked in a studly man's bed getting a massage. If only.
When I was reading the Greyback part, I thought what? Is Mariteri insane? She's going to have Hermione free even him? Has she become one of those author's who is so out of touch with reality and what is believable? But then I read on. Sorry I doubted you for a few seconds there.
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August 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Enough witht he evil cliffies already!!!