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by starstruck86

schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Dumbledore might care about Severus and Ron, but the situation is difficult. Whilw Ron might be of age, and has been the instigator for the whole thing, he is still a student, and Severus still a teacher.

Ron's starting to see that he is going to deal with a lot of things if he continues with Severus, starting by Severus's mood swings, and ending with his own future. It's not going to be easy, as most truly valuable things are.

And, at least while they await for Albus's decision, they have decided to continue just like until now, with Ron unwilling to give Severus's up, and Severus trying to convince Ron that Albus has not forbidden it yet.

Davinci
person Sheree
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems our Mr. Weasley is getting his head around the whole situation of vampirism, but how is he going to handle the family/friend thing? I'm glad he's so determined (at this point) I just can't help feeling this isn't quite over and we haven't truly seen the extent of Severus' convictions yet - have we?

Can't wait to see where we're headed next....
person Jaino
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness! I've been busy for work and you've already posted 8 chapters! Amazing... I love this story, everything about it is just so spicy. I love how you still manage to keep Ron & Snape true to their characters and how they dance around each other. Thank you for posting!!
person abbicee
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOL, you know when I mentioned Dumbledore having them up for tea I wasn't really thinking it would happen. I was more expecting Molly to descend on the school demanding Ron come home and toe the line. Still, I knew the confrontation with Dumbledore would come eventually, somehow I just thought it would come later. I loved Ron in this chapter. I love how he stood up for Severus and I think one of my favorite parts was when he accurately zeroed in on why Dumbledore really let Severus stay after he was turned. So many people write Ron off as being stupid, forgetting that he was the one who figured out the chess problem first year. Sadly JKR didn't really seem to show Ron's intelligence after that, as if it was almost a fluke, but I like to think Ron's much smarter than everyone gives him credit for.
person Beth
schedule September 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories dealing with this pairing that I have ever read!!!
I look forward to reading more!!
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Bridgette came as a surprise. Like Ron, I was expecting a male, for some obscure reason of my subsconcious. Now, I liked her, with her no-nonsense attitude and her 'perchant for older men', which makes me smile, as she is bound to be considerably older than Severus, at the very least (and the fact that he was 'the one who got away' made me laugh). I had never thought about the reasons of the too much deep bond Ron and Severus share, but it all blends seamlessly into the story. Ron is insecure, as I have pointed out, and he seems to thrive on the fact that Severus wants him, and cannot seem to get enough of him.

Lol at Ron's thinking that the snowman needs a wife so that he won't be alone.

The scene in Severus's bed - no words, my mouth is still dry from reading it, starting from Severus's show and ending in the decadent sheets that Severus changed especially for Ron. Seriously, Severus's show? That was enough to make me go to brainmelt mode. Then, you followed on it. I might have to ask you someday where do you get all this talent for writing smut. Must be from the same place where you get the interesting plots and the amazing characterizations.

>>I am also having issues with Severus
person talley
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First to answer:-Talley
person kai
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it was written for me, awww you shouldn't have, i love you even more now. ^_^ yes for rimming. XDD
i loved that their working thru their things now. i love ron in this. ^_^ he's to adorable.
i actually like that their going to be spending some time apart, it'll show how much theymean to each other more, then. also Severus giving Ron his nightshirt, so sweet. i loved that part. i can't wait for the rest.
person zanzi
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that normally Ron is my least favourite character in fanfic (I'm more of a SSHG or SSRL girl) but I just love what you've done with this story and with your others. I admit to loving a dominate Severus, so personally I'd like to see it ratcheted up a few notches--more snarly snark is always a good thing! Anyway, well done, and look forward to the next chapter!
person Sheree
schedule September 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't think they've had it too easy but there has been no outside intrusion or interference at all - This togetherness has to be tested by both those who know Severus is a vampire and those who don't.

It's time to turn it up a notch - I know there is supposed to be a physical bond but it's time to see how far it will stretch before one or both of them snaps.

teehee

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