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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hot damn!!
more please?
more please?
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I get the feeling that this story is going to be a lot of fun to read. It makes you wonder just what turn is the story going to take next. I found the scene with Severus and the surrogate wanna-be very amusing but I do have a strange sense of humor but I still think it was the right way to go. I do so enjoy stories where Severus is his usual tall, dark and snarky self. I will be eagerly awaitng the next chapter thanks very much.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I like the rewrite better than the original--you've obviously matured as a writer, and the entire thing has more nuance and better character developement. Besides, who wouldn't want Severus asking us for that little promise? ;)
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Interesting turn of events. I honestly didn't think that Severus would interfer, but I was secretly hoping he would though. Great chapter!! Keep up the excellent work. As always I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow... you are an amazing writer and I love this story so much! Thank you for writing it. In fact, I don't think I've ever seen a Hermione as accurate as yours or a Severus so accurate. Very nice! I will be following you story for sure!
I truly can't wait to see what happens next. MORE!!!!!!!!!
VT
I truly can't wait to see what happens next. MORE!!!!!!!!!
VT
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Also, forget all those people who make it seem like reviews aren't important. I know what it's like to be a writer that is ultra critical of herself and anyone too lazy to take a moment and leave a word or two is not very nice, but to turn around and complain about you asking for feedback is so inconsiderate. Some of us need a lot of encouragement. Though I must say, you are fantastic and should definitely have more confidence. I wish my story was a well written as yours. Check it out if you have a mo'. Have a great day!
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September 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Did Severus pick up on the fact that she refuses to let him into her heart ever again?
I love your story, I am not sure if I have read the first one or not. I've not been as big in writing reviews as I was in the past for a varity of reasons but I wanted to let you know that you have a fan out there. Keep up the good work.
I love your story, I am not sure if I have read the first one or not. I've not been as big in writing reviews as I was in the past for a varity of reasons but I wanted to let you know that you have a fan out there. Keep up the good work.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More please? Poor Severus, troubled, depraved, denied & horny! x
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually finding this very enjoyable. about the only thing I can say is there were a couple of phrases that didn't flow quiet right and I had to reread them. though longer chapters would also be good. Keep writing and yes I know how no reviews can make an auther feel.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ooh, naughty boy slipping potions into her drink and then listening in. Very Slytherin. But what would happen if she found out what he was up too?