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person talley
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice ride this fic. Slow and steady with our first real bump arising. I love it when characters are sick too. You did a good job of making him sound properly ill. I liked how nervous Snape was even after 7 hours on a train to think it out. The rats as before are an adorable addition. Ron should always have a pet. I'm still on the side that says, "evil hermione." My brother's fiance luckily didn't wait til the wedding but just a month away she suddenly just said no. As far as I know she's not given a real reason. We found out about a year later she was married with twins. It really hurt my brother and turned him off of relationships for years. He still calls the ex "warthog from hell." Hey, you might want to use that. Anyway back to the story, I'm enjoying hearing the pieces we also have missed as the reader of what happened after the battle at Hogwarts. The charity centerfold was a hoot. I am wondering the way Ron mentioned his uncertainity in pleasing Severous while he was sleeping what the heck they've been doing? And for that matter, was the muggle guy the one and only aside from Severus? I've yet to mention George but my heart goes out and unfortunately know about a twin losing his brother yet fortunately not intimately aware. It's devasting. George may need nurturing and a good hug but glad he knows how to dish it out as well. Looking forward to the next chapter.
person Sheree
schedule September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
LOVE the tussling men!!! And the fighting!!!

The best slash has all the posturing and head-butting of two rams in battle - AND this one's got them both.

Keep up the good work and look forwarde to more.
person Sheree
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes - Snape needs to address that little slip doesn't he? Ron needed a lip lock on that *wink

Phew - that was, uh, well, uh, quite the roller coaster ride - great as usual, but will we see some more "angry" Sev or is he gone?

It doesn't matter they've got lots of hills to climb as it is - LOL - Loving It!!
person morganabythesea
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes, the oasis of a story I have been looking for in a very large desert! Extremely well written, sexy as hell, and so far with a manageable and healthy amount of angst. :-) How do you do it you talented fool? I am looking forward to any and all updates.
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I have honestly never been a big Snape fan but when matched with my fave Ron -- you got me hook, line, and sinker. Keep up the fabulous work.
person kai
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that last line just killed me. so funny, i loved it.
damn hermione!! cheating on your fiance for a year, shame on you!!
ahhh, i love this story!!

update soon!!
person hairsprayX12
schedule September 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!!! Raunchiness!!!

Oh my good gravy, Herms be a bitch!!!

Umm...I wonder if Severus will question Ron about that slip he had about fucking someone else?
person kai
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor ron!! ;_;
and george too!! that's so sad. will you ever reveal why heromine waited until 3 hrs before the wedding? I'm wonder about that.
well, at least severus sent the letter but it's the holidays, everything never really makes it one time. hopefully it'll come in soon! update soon!!
person Sheree
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn Postal Service! Poor George, I can see him using Ron as a support system and Ron not thinking anything of it. I can also see George being his biggest supporter or his biggest problem w/ Severus...but only the writer knows which. Err

You really do an excellent job with the Weasley Family...the interaction between them all seems perfect.

More? Soon?
schedule September 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
One more time, you have blown me away with the characterizations (be prepared for my squee).
I ache so much for George. It is obvious that the very foundation of his life, Fred, has been taken from him, and he just can

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