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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like how through force of habit, Severus lets some of his old snark come out. Even when he's trying to be sweet.
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Does the Snoopy Dance of Happiness*
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September 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your response. I hope you know my question was not a complaint. A wonderful study of man in crisis. The auror training room was described like the tango. Perfectly timed and counters to each step. Though the end image was jarring and thought provoking. Poor Ron. I'd hate to go back and count how many times he said he was sorry. Seriously the man needs to come to terms with himself. Glad he wanted and did go to Severus. Hopes to see a lighter Ron and a stronger Snape in the next chapter.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh something new, and there were four lovely chapters of it too. :-) I like that you've made Ron a bit older here, not that I didn't like him as a student, but I think it puts them on a more even footing right from the get-go. Bad bad Hermione. It's one thing to fall out of love with someone, sometimes that's just what happens, but to let it go on so long and while seeing someone else too. Poor George. He's just stuck in a bad place isn't he? Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter. I really want to see Hermione get hers for doing what she did.
Can't wait until the next chapter.
Can't wait until the next chapter.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This weekend I read all of your stories. The vampire one made me very sad. This one is funny and sad all together. Question? Will Ron become pregent? Both love children it will be fun. Mpreg.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh god, you're right, she got horrible!
anyways, i liked that severus went to ron's place but why?
all needs to be explained soon!!
also, i wonder if who'll find out that severus is alive, my guesses is it'll be hermione. -_- only because their'll be more angst if it's her. hahahahaha....
anyways, i liked that severus went to ron's place but why?
all needs to be explained soon!!
also, i wonder if who'll find out that severus is alive, my guesses is it'll be hermione. -_- only because their'll be more angst if it's her. hahahahaha....
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that you write Ron and Severus as I see them too. This story is just lovely, and you've struck the correct balance with the tone. Ron isn't the caricature of a gay man that we see in most stories of this ilk. He's himself in all his rough glory. Snape isn't the snarky, sarcastic bitch, he's damaged but still human. I love this story and will be adding it to my profile recommendations. Thanks for sharing.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well son of a goat with no name!!!!!! Jealous Severus is...Squeeee!!!!!!
Loved the whole chapter, everything about it, from Ron being ill to Severus getting all possessive, wonderful!!!
Loved the whole chapter, everything about it, from Ron being ill to Severus getting all possessive, wonderful!!!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well that was nice. It's fun to see a jealous Severus, it's also fun to see a jealous Ron, as long as things don't go too overboard. I was glad to see Severus going to Ron's place and I hope it's not a one time occurance, though there is a bigger chance of Severus being found out. Why does Hermione choose the most inoppertune times to send Ron's things back to him? Is she doing it deliberately? Does she have some reason for wanting to hurt him or is she simply that selfish and clueless?