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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Very twisted and dark. But I like it.
The flashbacks and flash-forwards were used very effectively (usually I hate flashbacks/flashforwards because they can get so confusing but you did a good job with it here).
The ending was great because it just emphasized how the cycle never ends with the Malfoys.
Great job!
The flashbacks and flash-forwards were used very effectively (usually I hate flashbacks/flashforwards because they can get so confusing but you did a good job with it here).
The ending was great because it just emphasized how the cycle never ends with the Malfoys.
Great job!
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September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Still not rewieving my own story. Still in need of an "answer review" button. People who take time to review deserve answers.
for qwerty:
Thank you very much. *bows* This has been my darkest fic this far and quite ...enjoyable to write;D
Personally I love broken-up timelines (they can add quite a lot if there is an actual story) but they can be very confusing so I thought that it works with dates for what is happening. I guess it does.
for qwerty:
Thank you very much. *bows* This has been my darkest fic this far and quite ...enjoyable to write;D
Personally I love broken-up timelines (they can add quite a lot if there is an actual story) but they can be very confusing so I thought that it works with dates for what is happening. I guess it does.