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The last chapter was a wonderful opening of the two. Ron so honest and sincere. Severus finally letting himself love again fully. Surprised by Harry's visit but loved his message. I adore your Weasleys. Miffed we never learn of the horrendous client who beat our poor Ron forcing the end of this story. I had a few of the things Severus said and the felt but I lost them before I could safely put them here, but you had some magnificent insights and sayings that really put this relationship for me as true and core to the what makes these two work when put in the right hands. I'd be interested to see a few more years down the road after the aftermath of his past hopefully more behind him and the public and his family and friends. The epilogue had me wondering what the hell you were going to do, yet I trusted and you delievered . . . a wedding. *sighs of great relief*

Looking forward to more from you.

Sorry I haven't reviewed for this one, but as always, it was fantastic! :-)

RL has been bad, but this story gave me something to look forward to. I read all of your stories after "Invitation" (my first) and loved them all. I knew you almost always have happy endings and needed that, so again I am thrilled.

I have to say (maybe again) that there is something not only to the content, but the language, and flow of your stories that interests me and soothes me somehow. Even the sad ending of "Invitation" obviously left me wanting to read more of your style and stories. So thank you for sharing them and for being an incredibley talented writer!

My pc died and I finally was able to buy a lap-top, love the capabilities, hate the keyboard! :-) It is so hard to get used to, I keep dragging my wrist over the scroll. LOL

Looking forward to the next story as always. :-)

Morgana

Whew! No one died. You did have me a bit worried there after that gut squeezing chappie. Yes, you squeezed them again, but it was a good squeeze.

Peacocks and over compensating Malfoys....hehehehe!

To imagine Ron living with Severus, doting over a cat, and bringing his old bat cups of tea, makes me smile.


If awards ever go out for Ron/Snape shippers, you must have it!

Absolutely beautiful. I loved how you ended it, especially that Ron had to deal with everyone knowing what he was prior to his return. I can not wait until your next Ron/Snape story!

yes! so it was his family. but how it was done was awesome. severus getting advice from albus about how to deal with the situation and giving him the push he needed to do what was right.

and here is hopping that everything works out like albus said.

wow, I actually cried...beautiful

How poignant. Tissues litter my desk, I don't think Severus's day necessarily went downhill but around a corner.

The parting shot in the graveyard was a clear indicator of that - he wouldn't be back. The fact that he recognized the look on Ron's face before he left him of relief and not anger opened those damn emotional flood gates of mine and never let go.

Just as I had hoped! Perfection.

I love, love, LOVE your stories! I suck at getting around to reviewing, but really have to in this case. You've struck gold AGAIN with yet another great take on Ron/Severus. I'm really enjoying the more insecure, inexperienced Severus and the more knowledgeable Ron this time around. Keep up the great work-- I can't tell you how happy it makes me when I see an update from you :)

Sweet Jaysis, girl! Way to squeeze my guts. :*(

Well, thank goodness for Ron that Albus, even in death, manages to call Severus out on his neurotic shit. True I'm a fangirl, but that doesn't stop the urge to want to grab him by the shoulders and shake him.

"What's wrong with you?!"

"I'm tragic. That's what."

(with the best Cher from Moonstruck I can muster) "SNAP OUT OF IT!"


One more chapter, eh? I can see this going either way truthfully. I await breathlessly.

Oh crappers, the snotty cry again!!!

But damn this was the most beautiful, heartbreaking, fantastic chapter to date. Woman, I bow to your Ron and Severus greatness!!! One more chapter left, eep!!!