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I like the fact that Ron knows and recognizes that Severus is expecting his complete rejection after this, and how he collapses in the bathroom after everything has calmed a little, crying from his conflicted feelings. He is in for a long healing

I don't know why, since I've read sadder stories, but this chapter had me crying and the poem at the end just capped it off. Maybe I picked up the feeling from Severus that this is the end of him and Ron, or maybe it was the graveyard or ghost Harry showing up, definitely when Bill and George came into the bar and hugged Ron. Just one more chapter? Can it be enough to resolve everything? Now my tea is all watered down and salty.

What a lovely chapter. Joy to see feisty Albus. Who knew a portrait could put Snape in his place? I loved the Weasley reunions. Poor Harry but he knows whats best for Ron. I loved the ending. I teared up quite a bit and sniffed a few times. *will not admit to actual tears following Ron's tears* The poem was poignant and great way for Severus to explain himself. Loved loved the ending with Ron wanting to now to want to save Severus. I know it's not going to be pretty rainbows and cute kitties and puppies but looking forward to the wrap up of this very psychological story.

Reviewing a day after I read this. Had to let it digest. I'm frustrated with Severus. He's so into Ron, yet those mental comments make me wonder. He calls Ron a whore in his mind and worse thoughts. I know he hates himself; I'm like that alot. Anyway, you did a good job of showing how broken Severus is. Ron sure was cuddly and rather clingy. Squee! at Draco's entrance and finding out Snape's other preference. Loved seeing Ron being free and then bit my lip when they started to really get into that truth or dare game. Meant to say in the previous chapter is part of Ron's suffering trying to see Harry or maybe trying to see Hermione? I do hope they both get out of their confining ruts. Anyway I enjoyed the rollercoaster of emotions and that very nervous will Ron be caught part.

Whoooooooaaaaa! Great work!

Is Draco going to go home and think about the voice he heard? Malfoy's shock was great.

The drinking game was a hoot, but I really wanted Sev to admit Ron was his unrequited love...but I suppose he doesn't know that yet. Hmm?

I hope I have fingernails to last thru 2 more chapters...will they or won't they?

oh crap!!! No, no , no...Sev is going to pull a flit isn't he?

*grabs box of Kleenex and two bottles of whiskey and waits with bated breath for chapter 6 (says a little prayer too)*

awesome chapter as usual. ^_^
draco finding out his godfather was gay, loved it. i got a little tense at that moment, i was 'oh no! ron's gonna come walking down & all hell is gonna break loose' but it didn't go that way and i'm glad and kinda disappointed at the same time. like i wanted them to be found out but not. so i'm glad how it turned out.

also that q & a part with the truth potion, awesome. ^_^

This whole chapter was wonderful. Even though Severus was letting his demons get to him at the end I loved it. From Draco coming over to announce his engagement (Awww) to the drunken reveals. Sirius? Really? No wonder Severus hated Black so much, it must have been such a blow when Sirius sent him to Remus. Has Severus realized he's fallen in love with Ron and is terrified of it? Does Ron love Severus? I can't wait for the next chapter, even if it does put us closer to the end.

I love the push and pull these two seem to be doing. Severus pushing the boundries as Ron pushes back and now vice versa seems to be happening with the additional force of Severus pulling back. I cannot wait to see what you have in store for us next (especially if Draco lives up too his threat of wanting details when they go back to work).

Great job.