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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Seriously wow. Update! That was a way too evil chapter, even though it was brilliant. Please don't kill Harry. Please tell me you love happy endings too much to ever not do one. OH my GOD... How am I possibly going to be able to wait 3 long days? And possibly more, as I doubt the problem will disappear within a chapter... Damn your brilliant writing and fantastic story for making me this addicted! *SOBS*
Seriously, you're killing me.
And what a brilliant death it is...
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
While I find it hard to believe that Dumbledore would burden Harry with news of his own impending death I think that it really fits in with the story. Perhaps when Severus finds out, we all know he's going to, he confronts Dumbledore, right before Harry is supposed to be meeting with the Headmaster? Then Harry can overhear an adult actually caring about him and that can start him trusting Severus. Maybe. It seems like something of the sort should happen.
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I always love reading your updates! The Snape and Harry interaction and angst! Oh the angst! :P Always a pleasure! And this is from someone who gave up hoping to find original and intriguing Harry Potter fanfiction.
person SP777
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Don't have to respond*

For what it's worth, I hope Serverus keeps doing what
he is doing and breaks through that barrier Harry has
built up.
person Mia
schedule December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was astonishingly painful. My gut is still clenched. And yet it was so beautiful and gracefully, beautifully simplistically artful that I could not move for it. Thank you. Your story is becoming quite important to me. I watch for it too often.

~Mia
schedule December 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks so much for the update!!!!
person SP777
schedule December 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
about #19....

You know, a thought just came to me while reading the interaction between
Harry & Narcissa.

I don't know about any other stories anywhere else, but I've never read
a story where Narcissa shines in her own right, like in battles or during
a plan on an intense situation. To show she is more than just the 'wife'
and 'mother'.

She WAS a Slytherin.

Think you could get into her head?

By the way, loved the interaction between Harry & Snape..and the 'woe is me'
moment from Draco, for a brief second.
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have a feeling Dumbledore's gonna make Harry's day worse. :P I love the Snape and Harry interaction! Always a pleasure!
person Mia
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You write magic, you know. It trickles from your fingers more tangibly and real than any latin phrased spell will ever be. Thank you for enchanting and captivating. I crave this story far more than I should. It leaves behind tendrils of thought and attention and fascination in my chest and I find myself thinking and wondering over it quite often. Thank you.

~Mia
person k lave demo
schedule December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ur welcome. hmmm... is this a hint of the beginnings of a change in harry's view or is denial still going to be strongly prevalent for awhile yet? is snape making headway in his perceptions or is he at a stasis? and am i going to stop asking questions? (*eight ball* one would hope) i don't know if it's because of previous fanfics but whenever Dumbledore shows up it seems to mean something unpleasant which is a shame since i do like his character. really enjoying the story and don't ever stop writing. i think it'd be a loss to the fanfic world if u did. (no pressure or nething) have u ever considered doing a child fic? as always til next time. viven la vida loca!

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