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about #15....

You know, I thought about you writing a scene where Harry teaches
Draco how to fight defensively, privately. At least, Draco would
be able to hold his own against a couple of DE's.

...and I see the preslash has commenced! :-) Can't wait for zee
row-mance.

Oh! I'm not sure if anybody else got it, but I liked the 'mental'
commentary Harry was having about Severus being a strict father
where you can't get away with NOTHING.

Heck, I don't know about YOU, but my mother's word was LAW...and
of course, I couldn't back talk in her prescence.

Me: *grumble**grumble*
Her: What did you say!
Me: Nothin'!

Haha! :-D

As a matter of fact, that me thinking when you DO get to the Parental
Unveiling, I was thinking of a scene between Harry & Severus, where
Harry tries to buckup to him and Severus puts his foot down and says,
"When it comes to you I AM the law...and I'll, also, be Judge, Jury
and EXECUTIONER if you don't listen!"

...all said with a smirk, of course.

I'm disappointed Snape hasn't figured it out yet. He did see the glamour on Harry so he should have a clue that maybe he isn't looking like James Potter anymore.

Good job. great plot, but how and when do you explain why Harry doesn't look like Snape or Lily aside from Lily's eyes? I mean does he change features in the next few chapters?

yes its moving forward. sorry that i misunderstood and thank you so much for not ending it so short. hai i'm glad you don't write to much snarry or i'd never be able to read another fic again. ur writing abilities overshadow most others. i can't really read that many drarry's that aren't yours. i guess it's just hard to see harry as arrogant though it is easier to see signs of it in the later books. sometimes it's easier to see things when someone explains they're pov. as always enjoyin ur fics. til next installment. viva la vida!

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Great chapter.

I always thought it was an injustice in the books that noone ever tries to connect Harry with this mother. Thank you for making Snape finally see it.

Loving this story!!

of course I just love how this is going. Draco being Draco is just so good. I can't help but think of the old song My Angle Is A Centerfold when Snape was thinking about Lilly and how she wasn't the person he thought she was. great job as always.

what do you mean set the preslash back? hmmm... my lips can't help but quirk at severus' father comment. i love that subtle irony and honestly that's the truth. i wonder what severus would do if he realized he had a common personality trait to james. *malicious chuckle* i realize i keep attacking sev but i do like him and i don't think harry is innocent either. by the way do you see harry as arrogant? you mentioned that there aren't that many chapters left. does that mean a sequel or you being evil and leaving us hanging? and don't know if i mentioned it but really appreciated the parseltongue fic. i can imagine harry doing that in thier pheonix... welp. viva la vida!

Great chapter! I can't wait until Severus finds out the truth about Harry!