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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i do like well-written angst but there's nothing like well written fluff either and i love both. that was a very good chapter full of fluff moments. blissful highs are in the forecast for tonight. i was hoping u'd write a sequel and am quite glad that u have acknowledged that there will be something in the future. i really enjoed this severitus fic. it's hard to find many good ones that aren't rushed. by the way if u can reccommend any worth reading it would be greatly appreciated. still, i think the best part of this fic was the open... "reconciliation" between draco and ron. i think that may actually help hermione back off a little too. only bad point. neither harry nor draco got to throw in a good hex. it would have been entertaining. til next time!
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
YES!!! He called him Dad. When I first read it I jumped up and just screamed about how awesome that was.
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
damn! it was so touching and heart-wrenching when harry finally called severus 'dad'. excellent story(:
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March 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww.. father/son bonding at its best.
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March 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #48...
1. You know, I said it once and I'll SAY it again..I can't STAND
Ginny Weasel, not in the books and the movies AND I feel it was
cliched the way the series ended, I still would have preferred if
Harry had either passed away OR found someone else different,
instead of it being SO freaking obvious. I even felt Hermione
could have found a better boyfriend/husband.
Does that make sense?
2. "I
1. You know, I said it once and I'll SAY it again..I can't STAND
Ginny Weasel, not in the books and the movies AND I feel it was
cliched the way the series ended, I still would have preferred if
Harry had either passed away OR found someone else different,
instead of it being SO freaking obvious. I even felt Hermione
could have found a better boyfriend/husband.
Does that make sense?
2. "I
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
so KAWAII! and there's the moment i've been waiting for. best chapter hands down. i loved that moment because it conveyed so much about harry had accpeted snape and because i think it'll help heal harry's fears of rejection even if it doesn't completely go away. it is a shame snape didn't get the letter and i knew harry would regret it. sigh still it was worth it to read harry calling snape dad. thank you so much! i have a feeling snape kind of did harry a favor by staving off ginny. draco may have gotten jealous. til next time. ja ne!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That scene was even more heartfelt than what I could have ever imagined! I think you should do a small input with that scene through Snape's perspective as well, because, well, I would KILL to read that. Okay, maybe not kill, but shower you with chocolate or something! ;) I'm glad you chose to extend the fic a bit, although I would like it to go on forever, just for the extra brilliance it puts in my everyday life. Excellent writing!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh the sappy ending. Hopefully Draco will show up next and we'll have a smutty ending too.hehehe
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HE SAID DAD!!!! OHHHH! THAT IS TOOO SWEET! OMG! U need to update. do they both get their happy ever after and does the story continue from here? O Please Update!
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March 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and this chapter! However, I think, if you intend to end this soon, you need to let Harry tell Snape how he found out about their relation. Otherwise, that is a loose thread. Wouldn't it make a perfect scene if they have a heart to heart talk in the hospital wing when Harry wakes up, and Harry tells him and recieves forgiveness? I realize you might feel this is unnecessary, but it is as of now a loose thread that you should deal with. Still, thank you for an amazing story and for a wonderful thing to read these part few months! I really don't understand how you have time to update every third day, though I'm very happy you do.