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for Practicing Liars

by Lomonaaeren

person puck
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sweet glorious gods. That was gorgeous. Absorbing, beautiful, intense, passionate. I need a cuddle and a bit of a cry now, and it's not even over. Now I will reread and proceed with the awed silence.
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love you.
person k lave demo
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
u always have a way of wording things to make it seem like that was the best resolution, choice or revelation. as if it only makes sense that that would be THE outcome. i appreciate how u incorported harry's love and where it stems from as a reference to book five. it worked very well. i'm assuming one more chapter to sum things up. sigh... so it really will be a slow death. ah well it'll be worth the wait. til next time! ja ne!
person red713
schedule March 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the way you handled the "battle" - especially Harry's realization of Voldemort's insignificance. That worked really well; it resonates with the rest of your story thus far. I'm a little sad that Harry didn't get to show off some of his kick-ass dueling skills (because they are simply just that cool). Couldn't a Death Eater or two have stayed around afterwards to fight him until Snape arrived? I suppose your ending was more elegant, but still. Maybe I can just imagine that he'll come across some vengeful Voldemort supporters during the summer or something like that. :) Thanks for the chapter!
person SP777
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #46....

After reading the conclusion Dumbleduck had figured early on, I
find myself...disappointed.

I hoped Harry would have been the one to tell him instead of
the 'I'm-so-much-wiser-and-will-only-tell-you-on-a-need-to-know-basis'
old man letting on how he *wink..wink* KNEW.

I would like to see SOMEone be ahead of the game before the old
man for a change and him admitting that he just didn't see that coming.

For once...
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm waiting for Draco to try and pull a Ginny and offer himself up sexually to Harry before he leaves to go off to battle. LOL Not that I'm trying to rush you into throwing them together in a pairing. I hate it when authors do that and I am greatly enjoying the fact that we're 46 or so chapters into the story and it continues to progress at its own pace. :D

Keep up the great work.
schedule March 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your fic, I know that I don't review as often as a lot of other people do but I imagine you would get tired of me telling you how wonderful I think your fic is and how I check every three days to see if you have posted an update, although as creepy as it sounds I generally check daily on the off chance that you were feeling rather generous. I also enjoy reading your one shots and Soldiers in between updates. Thank you for your wonderful work and as much as I look forward to seeing HOW this ends I do believe I will still be sad when it does. Anyway, much luck in life and much happiness also... ~K
person koki
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thank god!! was siting tense thinking harry died!!
And i so want to kick weasleys head in!! stupid ginger lanky annoying......person.
And Hermione is meant to be the brightest witch of their generation? Seems a bit thick to me.
Still good though.
x
person koki
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
idiot bloody woe is me!!!
person koki
schedule February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i dont trust him either

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