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by Lomonaaeren

person k lave demo
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i can't help but think that there is a bad reason/motive behind this kind of decision. nonetheless the "caught-in-a-embarrassing-act" scene was brilliant in how understated it was. also i think that may have been the first time harry casually referred to snape as "dad" in his thoughts without reacting to it. i am currently reading a story by meander and it shares elements that remind me somewhat strongly of your own. it was written in 2006 i believe. Viva!
person SP777
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about # 44...

1. I want everything settled. I want Voldemort gone and the Death
Eaters under arrest so that I can be with my boyfriend and my dad and
things can be normal.


-awww..that was so freakin' sweet, that my tooth fell out. :-)

2. Well, you did a plot twist...you haven't done those in like...forever???
O_o
schedule February 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
loving the updates keep them coming please!
person AAR
schedule February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i do not usually start reading stories that are not completed already, and if i do i do not go back to finish them. yours is an exception! keep going!
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet to see snape acting like a father. i thought it was too cute. hope to see more fatherly possessivness. update soon please.
person SP777
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
about #43....


Okay, this was a filler, but a lovely one at best. :-)

I can't wait to see what you have in store for Severus & Harry
for Christmas. But, what would Severus give him?
person polka dot
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think Harry would be safe with Dumbledore now that the entwining potion has worked.
person k lave demo
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
yes the part i've been waiting for. definetly a good chapter. i like how u made snape a good father without compromising his personality. it fits. especially since now harry can no longer put up the same defenses and arguments as before. also i really like that portion with draco's doubts and how they were quickly voided. it was a sweet moment without the necessary action. til next time. VIVA!
person slashslut
schedule February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
my GOD, being friends with ron and hermione must be EXHAUSTING!!! i think they both deserve a hex or two from harry;)
schedule February 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! So Snape finally gets Hermione's - well, maybe not approval, but at the very least a temporary trial period of "we'll see." lol.

Keep up the great work!

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