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November 19, 2021 at 12:00 AM
How 😍!!!!
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December 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. Short and sweet.
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October 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Much better.
Compared to your original version, this one is leagues ahead in quality. Still, it could use some more refining, but for a simple, quick oneshot, this is perfectly acceptable. I noticed a few typos, and some jarring phrasing, but otherwise I do commend the effort.
Death.
Compared to your original version, this one is leagues ahead in quality. Still, it could use some more refining, but for a simple, quick oneshot, this is perfectly acceptable. I noticed a few typos, and some jarring phrasing, but otherwise I do commend the effort.
Death.