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schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story that was brilliantly written as always.
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved the story! It was simple and still very hot. I do love a vulnerable Snape and a confident Hermione.
person DJ
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love it, and the little short chappies every day are better then waiting forever for a long one. At least that is my opinion. They always seem to brighten my day a little bit. I really enjoyed this story. Good Job!
person Mia
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You know what? I really enjoyed that rather abrupt ending. More than I thought I would. I should know by now that I am going to enjoy whatever you write. But this caught me off guard. I suppose I was expecting it to linger on. Thank you for always surprising me. You are a delight to read.

~Mia
person Amy
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
SEQUEL! This was such a great story....I want to see Hermione teach him more lol. The teacher turned into the student, it's great. I like how you dont make Sev a "stallion" he's a normal guy and that's great. Good Job! But I still want that sequel...lol.
person suckerforsnape
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
As if she would ever reject him!! Wish the story was longer(as always). Thanks
person Janeplay
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful story. Thank you! :) Severus was very real and it was great to see him unsure instead of super confident. I really enjoyed the part of chapter 9 when he realised that Hermione was into him; it made me smile.
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I likes it I does! But I gotta say, at some point in the future, MORE ADAM SWEETMEATS!!!! :)
person ismene5
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is sooo funny and erotic.
Please keep going.
person Janeplay
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this story.It's easy to get into and the charcters are wonderfully developed. It's a refreshing take on Severus, and it's kind of nice to think that he might not be all that confident under the stern exterior! Keep up the good work! :) *hands over author's favourite treat* - for inspiration!

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