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for The Expectant Detectives

by MariaTeresaQuintanar

person arrabella
schedule November 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yep I am following this 1 too> and the song is Holla Back Girl by Gwen Steffani>
Are we gonna get a whole circus or jujst the side show?
person Tara
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter lol sounds like someone is killing circus people. Anyways I think the song is Gwen Stefani "Hollaback girl" Maybe?
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Someone is leaving defunct circus performers in Lucius' house? Yeep! Now that is one I never, ever would ahve thought of! More, please.
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think that Lucius had the circus over at his house when he gave the pot to the house elfs. lol. I like how this story is going. I know what the song lyics are to your mini-quiz is : Holla back girl.
person anncee
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
now who could be leaving dead bodies at dear lucius' house?? sounds like they were taken from a circus of sorts...a little man...a contortionist? hmm very curious...

oh and "cuz i ain't your hollaback boyyy, i ain't your hollaback boyy" lol i remember seeing it on youtube....a friend showed it to me...but i can't remember the name....snake something or other?
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, just a note on a slight typo in ch 2: it's 'rigor mortis' not Riga Mortis, just so you know.
person Mia
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I don't know the song. But if I was to take a guess about the artist based on your hint I'd go with Hanah Montana's daddy, Billy Rae Cyrus of Achy Breaky Heart fame.

I love this chapter. Your humour and intelligence and quirkiness are perfectly balanced.

~Mia
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like the way this story is starting out and I am looking forward to reading more of it. great job.
person katiekrm
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love the whole 'telling Severus' sidebar going on-LMAO. From the fact that the Aurors are making bets with Lucius, I'd guess they don't really think he's guilty either. Dont know the song and not going to google it.

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