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Oh wow that wow short but had a kick

Hey, it's been some time since I had to write a review, because most of the stories that are there are very similar, you read a few and you feel like you've read them all. But you know what, I just had to write something here, even though it's just a snippet really and not yet a story, but hey, like they say, length doesn't matter.
So, the idea seems similar to M-Day in X-Men Comics, not much diffrence between 'No more mutants' and 'No more magic', but still I can't remember if I ever saw a story based on that.
There are a few errors, so if you really want to write more, finding a beta reader would be good.
I wonder how this story will turn out, but so far so good and I'm looking forward to reading more.