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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
What can I say about this story....several things....How about hot, erotic, dark and sexy *GRINS* I so love me a dominate Snape, wish I could be his submissive. Hermione is one lucky witch. Well done for your first fan fic I'm deeply impressed, I look forward to reading other stories you come up with.
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December 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating. Your descriptions of the sensations and her reactions was very literate, for more than most on this site, with a few notable exceptions. If this was your first, I will look forward to your next with great anticipation.
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December 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow. that is soooooo hot!!!! please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Execellent start. And I love the pen name
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November 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Are you sure this is your first story? That was amazingly evocative for an initial attempt. I'm very impressed! I'll definetely be watching for the next chapter.