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I would love to see of this story as well please

Thank you for your review. I am glad you are enjoying my story. I also appreciate your opinion, though honestly,
I do not need a Beta. I was using word pad, and that application does not have a spell check. The reason that there are a lot of spelling errors, is one of several reasons. The first being that I type fast, so my fingers sometimes hit the wrong keys. The second is because, I am not the best speller. The third being that I was using WORD PAD. I hate word pad. The computer I was using, does not have Microsoft word. The forth is that, when you have a Fiance, who is extremely loud, it is rather hard to concentrate.

Okay, so this is a good news/bad news kind of review.

First, I really appreciated the story, the thought you've obviously put into it, and the storyline itself is a good one about an important topic. And I like how you're developing it and taking it steadily onward.

Now the other part: You really, really need a beta, or someone who can help with grammatical issues. It's a good tale, but the constant spelling and word-choice errors are very distracting, and a good beta would just help tighten it all up.

I really hope you continue it and would love to see where it's going.

Just please promise something really bad, painfull and humiliating to come Rons way????

Good start.