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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good. Would have loved it more but for the cheating, which I hate even in fiction. Other than that: very nice and keep it up.
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fascinating beginning. You've got the characters well set; I'm going to enjoy this one!
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January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice ;) I was wondering only yesterday if you were still about. I know it is technically late here, but Happy Birthday (I said the same on LJ earlier, I don't know if you saw)