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HI this chapter is good
keep it up
like to read more
greets sky

Oh my~ while you enjoyed writing it, I most definitely enjoyed reading it. The idea of OCs as Harry's older sibling has always made me cringe and want to X the story bu this was so well written that I couldn't help myself. I'm very curious to see where this ends up. I also liked the way you introduced the story, it makes it stand out even more from all the others. I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the good work! (uhmm sorry if this gets submitted twice... Aff being weird >>)

Brilliant first chapter!!! Very nicely written. Can't wait for the next chapters. :)