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June 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good start to the story but you need to run a spell check and proofread before you post.
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February 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome sart, hope you continue, I'd really love to see how Snape handles being a teen again, lol
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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the way this story started off, and I'm looking forward to reading much more. However, I think more attention should be paid when you are proofreading. There were a few spelling/capitalization errors. (I'm a bit of a grammar Nazi.)
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February 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic beginning xx