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March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What did they do to Harry?
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March 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmm. Not sure as yet about this one but willing to hang around to read more. Just hope that future chapters are alot longer. LOL :)
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March 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
not much of a hook. If you made the first chapter longer (a lot longer) and got some plot in there that the reader can grab onto, this might turn out to be a good story. Until then, you'll loose everyone who stops to read it