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for The Apology

by KohakuShadow

person Sheree
schedule March 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Bill that wanton rascal.

All squirmy, panty and hot for our Professor Snape.

Too hot to go on...but I must...sacrifice.

Loved it - steam and all.
person JanisJ
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay Bill! There's just not enough of him out there-- (plus a 30 year old Snape, not enough of him kinda older but still in the youthfully, uncontrollably horny age range!) And Charlie next! Woo-hoo!

Loved the "peek-a-boo porno" thought of Snape watching the in and out of his cock....

And the "tying up loose ends" innuendo was hilarious :) Great job! Can't wait for the next one, but will be sad it's over....
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
gosh! should i tell you you that in my eyes you are the queen of pwp? porn with plot that is :D

the image of bill naked with his robes on the floor was very sexy. and the sex on the table!

*melts*

i might have said in another review (apologies if i repeat myself---) but there is some art you might like on lj.

fanlay.livejournal.com

there is some lovely (nws) bill/severus, harry/severus, bill/severus and also remus/severus and sirius/severus ...

person Elvira
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved It!

So cute. Bill knows how to get what he wants lol. HA, they shagged the same guy hehehe.

Update soon!!!!
schedule March 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think I'm actually knocked out.

That was so deliciously hot, and to know that Charlie gets a go next turn? Eeeeee!

Loved the image of Bill on top of S with his hair tumbling over his shoulders, gorgeous!

Amazingly heated start to the morning, going to go and read the others now. Thanks for posting :-D

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