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OK, don't leave us hanging we want the good stuff!!! Oh yeah, LOVE IT!!!!

Hi. The only "complaint" I have is that you stopped there. lol This was fun from the first word and I look forward to the rest. Good job, HG4eva

I thought it was a very good chapter. I like the way you write. I would have liked to see a little more of Lucius talking, I suppose. I see him as a very teasing person. Before they played tonsil hockey (*snerk*) they could have bantered a bit. For two very sharp minds such as they are, words themselves could be a downright turn on.

I love to see new blood, so to speak. I'm glad you decided to post your story. I hope you continue it, because I'll keep reading. *Bows* Until next time.

Hey great first chap! I have to say i think its gotta be a little more than lust thats driving hermione. I was gringing with every guard she had to pass LOL. Cant wait to see what you post up next cracking start! xoxo

LOL. What a great start! The Hazmat suit was genius. I am looking forward to the rest of the story. :)