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August 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
isn't it just sooo sweeeeet :)
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April 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a very bittersweet little story. Filled with both sadness and hope.
I have to say though that there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors. For example Hermione had the gull to look guiltily at Harry - I think you mean gall not gull. Some of your paragraph's are also extremely long, making them harder to read. If you had someone beta this it would make a good story better.
I have to say though that there are quite a few spelling and grammar errors. For example Hermione had the gull to look guiltily at Harry - I think you mean gall not gull. Some of your paragraph's are also extremely long, making them harder to read. If you had someone beta this it would make a good story better.