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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it so much that i wanted to read more!!! Please update soon. I am wondering whether Malfoy doesnt really care about Hermione. Was it really just sex for him?
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. I love the story but i just had an idea!
Hermione should become prego. Lol what would draco do?
What would their friends say.
I love your story
Hermione should become prego. Lol what would draco do?
What would their friends say.
I love your story
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June 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am really liking your Draco. He's so much better when he's written as a vicious berk. Now, since you've got her going to Snape's class next, I'll simply say you've set a wonderful stage for a great many barbs from the potions master.
-You do have one typo that stood out to me: while hot flame should be white hot flame.
And I did like your lemon. Nice and sour.
-You do have one typo that stood out to me: while hot flame should be white hot flame.
And I did like your lemon. Nice and sour.
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG, please dont leave us hanging there! This is sooo hoooot! A fantasy came true! Hope you can update as fast as you can!
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June 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You are really mean for stoping there you know. Hell I hope you will post the next chapter before this day is over.
Liz
Liz
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
No, don't worry! You're too hard on yourself. It was great for it being your first story. Continue please. :)
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue.
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, tension. And yes, I had noticed. :) Now, if I were Hermione, I wouldn't have yelled at his door. I'd've conjured a chair, sat down, flipped up my skirt, pulled my knickers to the side, plunged my fingers in, and let him hear me moan until he opened the door....just as I was acheiving orgasm and screaming someone *else's* name. But then, I'm evil, and Hermione's a Gryffindor. So, there you go. At any rate, thus far, I am interested.
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you decided to update so soon and get rid of the suspense. :) Love where this is going and the summary is great too. Well, can't wait for your next update.
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June 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
What an excellent start to some much needed hotness!!!!! ^_^