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November 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM
Please continue
Update soon Please
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
more please!!!
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July 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice ^^ I really like where this story is going, and you have a nice writing style, though there are some spelling mistakes here and there. Hmm, an dyou wanted some ideas? Well here are mine:
Nuresy: White carpet, pale blue walls, with darker dots or stripes. Wood furnture. A rocker in one corner, and a toy chest that slides under the crib. ^^
Full name: Now that I think about it, Harry runs away before the babay is born, right? Well then how about Nathen James Potter? I like that ^^
Nickname: Nathen-Bear? lol XD
Nuresy: White carpet, pale blue walls, with darker dots or stripes. Wood furnture. A rocker in one corner, and a toy chest that slides under the crib. ^^
Full name: Now that I think about it, Harry runs away before the babay is born, right? Well then how about Nathen James Potter? I like that ^^
Nickname: Nathen-Bear? lol XD
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June 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, yay for the next chapter! Loved it!
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Totally love the story already! If you need a beta, let me know! a[dot]schmitter[at]web[dot]de
Love the tension!
Love the tension!
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June 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a promising start i hope there is more and you dont move to quikly with the 1 chapter i hate you next chapter i love you it truly will wreck a promising story :)