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person alleyPet
schedule August 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It has been years since I last read a fanfiction, but I felt I had to give you at least a quick note on how I like your story so far. I do hope you are continuing with it. Draco and Hermoine have always been a little bit of a secret dirty pleasure of mine. I kind of lost a bit of my enthusiasm for it over the years, but when I searched through some of the mess this site has to offer on the subject, I was really pleased when I found your story. It's funny, close to the characters form the original and I find myself curious what you might come up with next. I find it a little harsh that Narcissa would call her son a brat though. After all, it's her and her husbands fault bringing him up the way they did. Oh, but I love the fact that they would change their ways by living the life of a muggle. Please keep up the good work. There aren't many good fics around. We need you^^
person Mikka
schedule August 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This story is so good that it made me write my very first review. Where to begin? First, thank you very much for having Harry paired with Luna. I have nothing against Ginny, but... she was never as charismatic as dear Loony. :) I also think your version of Ron is by far the best I've seen in this site. Every trait that annoyed me about him is there, and you didn't miss the fact that he always mistreated Hermione without even noticing. Thumbs up for that! It was a pleasant surprise that you decided to include Pansy in the female friends group and I'm curious about her future development. Well done with Narcissa's character. It's always nice to see where the authors' imagination takes them, when writing about characters that didn't show up very often in the books. Lastly, Draco is adorable! I know this shouldn't be the best word to describe him, but after burning his fingers, nearly burning down the kitchen and calling Hermione in the middle of the night because he discovered the telly, it's just too much for me. I couldn't help but smile at these situations and I'm eagerly waiting for a new chapter.
person Petal
schedule August 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can you update please ? I've been waiting for a new chapter forever
schedule August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
REALLY loving this story so far. I VERY eagerly await a new chapter. <3
person Ally
schedule August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY like this story. I spent hours a few nights ago reading all 6 chapters. I love how unique your plot is! I'm reviewing because today while I was at work I actually thought about the story and was wondering if you had updated it yet! It actually made me excited to come home and check, lol. Looking forward to chapter 7!!!! Keep up the good work :D
person Petal
schedule July 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
WOW this is sooooo good! Please continue writing, and try updating more often :) I love it !
person Cosmyk Angel
schedule July 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Pouts. NO more chapters? I can't wait for the next chapter! This is a really fascinating story. I look forward to reading more of it.
Can you email me when you post future chapters please?

Thanks,
Cosmyk
person Pixi
schedule July 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am truly enjoying this story. I found it again after being away from AFF for awhile and was overjoyed to see the updates. Ron really needs to be set on his ear... he is really unpleasant in this story.
schedule July 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I think the humor, openness to his mother, and grief after the war were all REALLY true to life. Another chapter well done! :-) Thank you! HG4eva
schedule July 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
well you did not make ron a monster like most do but still he show how much he cared about hermonie, risking his life to save her, helping her when she down, he the one alway telling her how smart she is, and in cannon he help her a lot, he would not expect her to do all the cooking. draco a jerk her tried to kill people, you putting a nazi with a jew. and harry agree with it.

i think ron a much better man then draco, and far better for hermoine. the only way i can see draco and hermoien if ron dies. becouse i cant belive she would choice the jerk.

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