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for Love, Free as Air

by Lomonaaeren

person Takahashi
schedule February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Can you please fix your spacing.:-)☆
person Takahashi
schedule February 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Can you please fix your spacing.:-)☆
person TwistedEmpathy
schedule December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Can you please,please,please,fix your format. I really want to read your stories some of them the format is messed up.
schedule May 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey. I haven't actually read this story yet but I am going to- but I wanted to let you know that for this story, the Kinder Kindler story and the Their Phoenix story, the formatting is -=really=- messed up. It makes it kind of hard to read, actually. The paragraphs are all squished together and broken up, and there is random coding sentences thrown in- quite a lot throughout the paragraphs. Kind of like this style= 'mso- bidi-font-style :normal'> I was wondering if you wouldn't mind trying to fix it? >.< Thank you.
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story. You are very mature writer and I enjoy reading your work.
xoxo,
kitkat
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I stopped reading this while you were still writing it, because it got a little depressing somewhere in the middle, and I was at a point in my life when I needed no help with being depressed. I am so glad that I decided to finish it though. It. Was. Awesome. Though, I have to say, I don't expect anything less from you. All of your works are awesome. Thanks for a good read!
person Jester
schedule November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked this one very much :) Just wanted to let u know
person LadyFireCrab
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. I loved the slow development and the fact that the sex wasn't the focus. Not that I don't like stories with good, hot sex scenes, it was just refreshing to read one that didn't center on them.
schedule September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great ending. I loved it. Thanks so much for writing this, you know I am a huge fan.
person AoiNikko
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on finishing another multi-chapter fic! I really do love all of your threesome fics, it's amazing that you are able to make them work so well without it seeming fairy-taleish or horribly OOC. I was enjoying it so much, that when the final chapter came and I had finished it, I thought "That's it...?" It felt a little like it had just been cut off a bit early. I could just have been enjoying it that much that I was sad to see it end, however.

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