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for Love, Free as Air

by Lomonaaeren

person sanda
schedule July 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good story
person Mia
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That is one of the cruelest, nonevil, Snapes I've ever read. It actually made me think the phrase, "Poor Malfoy." Wonders never cease. I wanted to kick him repeatedly in the shins and say nasty things to him that he couldn't possibly have a comeback for. But in truth, he would, of course. Thank you for this. It made me angry, but it also made me smile evilly. Thanks.

~Mia
person inu-hottie
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore your work! It makes my days lighter when I see a competent writer creating stories that I can fall right in to and believe.

Snape's a real jerk in this...I mean a real jerk. How has that poor, misguided, snotty, yet somehow loveable blond been able to put up with it so long? I can imagine after spending enough time feeling put down, he would just curl up and take it, but come on boy! Be a man Draco! Stand up for yourself! I get that they are fugitives together, but if Draco has his wand, he could leave and spent his time in a secluded area where the wizarding world wouldn't find him, or he could go to a country that wouldn't extradite. Anyway, Snape deserves a good kick in the pants, and Draco needs to learn to stand up for himself.

I can't wait to see the next chapter. I eagerly await it, with baited breath.
person Mehla Seraphim
schedule July 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aww. Poor Draco. Snape needs a slap upside the head.
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am a very bad fanfiction reader because I don't review nearly as often as I should, but I had to tell you that I love your stories. The characters are rich and three-dimensional and it feels like they're breaking my heart, but in a good way if that makes any sense. I'm not going to start up with the'update now!' spiel because I figure you've heard that before, but I will be keeping my eye out for updates on this and all your stories and any new ones with bated breath.
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I love your new story! It's so different, so excited about it :D
person Enamoril
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You've spoiled me. I can't really get into stories that have habits anymore, even if I like the plot and I'm curious; the repeating spelling errors, the overuse of words of words or !... the way that everybody just gets together immediately because apparently they think that someone who reads their stuff wants hard situations to have an easy button.

Out of all things, now, I think its the stories that illogically solve things, without the bitterness that would logically be there, that I can no longer read :( I am truly, and utterly, spoiled by you... and the only thing that makes up for it is that you update every day. I love that, too. Kudos to you being the best online author I've ever read, and probably the best one I'll ever find.
schedule July 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Now this IS and interesting twist! I cant wait to see how this plot unfolds. I wonder how long it will take Harry to finally talk more and really convince them its actually him and then what Snape and Draco will do. Its all so intriguing. I always love your ideas and storylines and this is no exception. Hope you update soon!
person mia
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
My favorite stories of yours are when you have all three together in any capacity, but especially when they are working towards being lovers. Thank you.
person JanisJ
schedule July 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love all your stories, I truly do, but am SO excited that you made Harry's animagus form an African Grey! They are amazing birds and I've followed the progress and cognition experiments of Dr. Irene Pepperberg with Alex and his sister for years since my career is in interspecies communication-- even got to see her give a presentation and speak with her. It's perfect for Harry in this story to actually have a voice!
And as usual, I love this threesome dynamic. I can't wait to see how this goes (especially since they don't know he's really Harry and he will end up witnessing very honest, uncensored interactions from the two slyths). I will be on the edge of my seat for updates on this one!!!!

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