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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh! I love french fries...Are they Mcdonalds? those are my favorite. Great chapter cant wait to see more.
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August 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Soooo need chapter 4!!! Poor Hermione!!!
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July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!
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July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome start of story.
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July 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
looking good so far but if I may make a suggestion...a little separation of paragraphs or speaking parts would be much appreciated.
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool still likin it and thanxz for the clarifacation on the elph vrs. elf thing looking 4ward 2 reading more on that in later chapters..good job
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Obviously this is too short to satisfy our curiosity, please update soon!
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hmm, Well I would love to see more of this fic. It seems rather interesting so far. I anxiously await an update!!
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July 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is turning our pretty well for your first story! I hope to see more of it.
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July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good start but one question do you mean elf or is this a new species