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Soooo need chapter 2!!!

Fantastic oneshot! I wish there was more, but I've enjoyed it a lot as it is. Draco's incredibly well portrayed, and I liked the way you told the story. Thanks for sharing!

well its just sad this has almost 400 hits and this is the first review. I am very sorry about that. I really liked this fic. It was a little confusing at first withthe Reveal spell but I caught on right before you explained about Bellatrix. This was a great fic. I think you could even turn this into a 2 or 3 shot. I would be very interested to see how thier relationship progresses.