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i like but i kinda feel bad because its a joke

that was brill the way you turn harry into looking at sev really looking at the man

okay but who put the spell on harry

ginny knows how to deep thoat not good it tell'ss me slut but hay as long as she not with harry its cool

okay all re read chapter 37 to see but as it stand i really don't like albus that much for being blind anyway i hope that harry and sev have a good start when sev finds out about the baby and i can picture draco soft and loving because the choice his father made and as far as draco mom cissa i believe it all a act to protect her family that why i like her

This story is absolutely brilliant! I love it so much! Please update soon!

Hey, great story so far. I love how in-character you keep everyone and how realistic it all feels, it's fresh and interesting throughout, and you seem to really get inside the characters' heads. That said the chapters are a tad too short, (just finished six) it's like 'bam bam bam - next chapter!' and there isn't time to digest what's happened, which is a shame as this story has a lot of potential and I think you could be one of the better fanfic authors on the site :) I just think maybe a little more forward-planning, description and length - everything else such as plot, characters and imagery you have perfect :)

Hi! Sorry for being an idiot! When i opened the story today, I saw the first A/N, and there the explanation was.... felt so stupid... sorry again. YOu don't deserve stupid readers like me... but I'm going to stick around anyway... ;)Oh, there's a lot of chapters to read today... aaarrggh, and I'm half falling asleep, I'm so tired... but I can't sleep with more to read...

I've read the story before but it was never finished. However I hope that you truly finish this story this time, because i just love the plot. Especially the interaction between snape and harry, with snape not giving in too easily. However in the future I hope that harry doesn't get together with anyone else, or something. I want him to be a virgin for snape ;) since severus deserves the best :)

-lol- love it! So funny! Please update soon!