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August 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It definitely has potential and I certainly wanted more. :) I would add though, don't write anything with which you're not completely comfortable, but if there's some more naughtiness in you - bring it. ;) :)
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's cute as it is. But I wouldn't mind additional scenes. Especially on what he did when she said make me.
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August 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
A battle of wills and confrontations? Bring it on!
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, interesting begginning. I thought the ending was kinda abrupt, but still left me intrigued. Hope you update soon.
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LMAO...great ending. I was a bit confused as to the years but it was very funny.
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Cute.
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August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Could use a beta, but it's a cute story--tame for this site, but whatever, it's nice to see a bit of wrestling in a fanfic and it certainly has potential. :D