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by GryffindorToy

schedule November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg! I love it! You are a very articulate writer and you use words as more then just a message. You have a way of make the words into pictures in my mind. I'm totally sold!
person jetaime
schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore this story. I'm not a huge fan of Harry Potter fanfiction but I somehow stumbled upon this and I am in love with the premise. Keep it up! It's great! I can't wait for your next update.
person def789
schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well let me strat off by saying hi ^.^. Second thing I am in love with this story!!!!!!! I can't wait to read the whole thing. Btw I am very impatient soo your most probaly going to get a whole lot of "You need to write faster" Or " More story less life" But that would be very selfesh for me to say that. But I do ask that you get a chapter up soon. I am forever greatful that you have created this story I send lots of love one of your devoted fans, def789. Oh P.S I love the part were hermione was like " I can even lend him my dictionary so he can understand it" I lollies at it. ( LOL-LIES; Loling at something on numerous occastions.)
person Tals
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, simply lovely.
schedule August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am very pleased with this chapter. I am enjoying their relationship and getting to know one another time. I just hope when they finally meet face-to-face, they allow the feelings they've developed to overshadow their past. I also wonder who is going to figure it out first. Neither is being all that subtle. lol Thank you, HG4eva
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I CANT WAIT UNTIL THEY FIGURE IT OUT
person paigeey07
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! More please!
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this, immensely. And i'm impressed that I actually had to look up a word that you used! So few people have been able to do that, it's refreshing to find one who can.
I am undecided on how I like to view the Malfoy family relationships, but I find that I rather enjoy Lucius as the cruel dictator type AND as the kind caring father figure. That being said, I like the way you have him portrayed here.
And I like the letters between the two. Draco's are just a bit more snarky than Hermione's. I would enjoy it if you made them a bit snarkier as they get to know each other better. But, you are the author so I'll leave that up to you. XD
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very cute. I especially enjoy the way you write Hermione. I look forward to your next chapter!
person Mila-Renae
schedule August 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! Best yet! Loved the bit about having to loan Ron a dictionary so he could understand. haha. Brillent. I can't wait for an update! If you are on ff.net (I tried to find you) look me up. My screen name is the same as on here.

xoxo

Mila-Renae

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