rate_review Reviews

finally Har's real plans can come into play. i hope he and the others are enough to stop the mind control juice and other disturbing things the so called 'light' is up to.

I read it all and this is very interesting! I feel bad that Hermione and Harry have apparently lost years of their lives to some calming potion in their juice that made them just go with the flow. But now I want more!!! But didn't it take Hermione like 6 months of the new diet to snap out of it and decide to divorce Ron? I thought Harry has been on the diet for quite a few months already too. Shouldn't he be snapped out of it and ready to divorce Ginny too?

Can't wait for the vote and aftermath!

Really, really want SOMEONE to figure out that they have been drugged for years. Probably poor James too!

Harry should follow his wife one day to see exactly what she does. Makes me wonder if she doesn't "act" like a "dark" wife would.

hars doing well at keeping up appearances. still, i'm looking forward to when it all hits the fan.

Maybe Harry wont have to break with everyone in the family. But there will be hell to pay for his kids when they go to Hogwarts. Harry might need to get them homeschooled.

Review for chap. 2 - Ron's not acting weird, he's acting evil. And it's painfully obvious that both Harry and Hermione have been potioned, or mentally compromised in some other way, by the weasleys. I do hope you werent thinking that was subtle, because it was painfully obvious from about 1/3 into chapter 1. That said, it doesn't make the story bad or unappealing in any way. What's frustrating is the annoying AN that is rather insulting to your readers' collective intelligence. Have confidence in your writing *and* in your readers and resist the temptation of unnecessary explanatory or reassuring ANs. Off to read chapter 3.

Next chapter please

I really like this story! I am curious what Ron did to Hermione and why do I have a feeling that Ginny did it to Harry? I really like where this is going and would love to keep reading more. Keep up the great story line!

Chapter 11 is not a new chapter.