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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohmygod! I can't believe you just left it there! I'm gagging for more! Update soon please. (:
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love how this story is going, update soon
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
please update soon!!!!! good job so far.
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September 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How very mean of you to stop right at this point...
At first I thought that this chapter appears to be a bit boring, since it first didn't show much difference to the last one.
But then, (Surprise!) your story takes quite an interesting development and I'm looking forward to continue reading.
Please don't let us wait too long.
Claire
At first I thought that this chapter appears to be a bit boring, since it first didn't show much difference to the last one.
But then, (Surprise!) your story takes quite an interesting development and I'm looking forward to continue reading.
Please don't let us wait too long.
Claire
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September 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice work! I hope she caught him in the act...he needs to feel some embarrassment! Can't wait to read more.
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving this, are you going to update soon? If you do I promise to review
Kindest Regards
ER
Kindest Regards
ER
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was so freaking hot! I want to see more of this story! Please continue. I beg of you!!!
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September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ooooh! I love it :) I hope you write more soon!
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is wow. You might want to up your rating to Adult++ though. I did not realy care for what he demanded of her but if the rating was upped I could have expected it as it was very demeaning. Interesting story and cannot wait to see what is next.
Mare
Mare
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September 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens next. Hopefully Severus will give in