rate_review Reviews

Im totally in love with this story you have no idea. you need to keep writing and i dont care if they love each other or whatever i just want you to keep writing. this is really well written and i love it. Please keep up the wonderful work.

lol cheeky little thing knows how to make severus her love slave! more please!

great update!!! please do so again soon :)

Oh, Hermoine fights dirty...I LOVE IT!!!

Thank you for this Thanksgiving feast.

What a lovely sensual story! Poor Severus! But who better than Hermione to open him back up to love and companionship after so many years of playing the spy and being alone. Keep up the good work!

more more more!!! i am LOVING your story! you're actually writing in a way that sounds like snape, unlike many others! can't wait t read another chapter, and i hope it's soon!

Please tell me you're planning to update this...
I will beg. (; >_>)

I wanted to share my admiration of your piece. :D I enjoyed this so much I had to share this with all my friends and since the words I told them are precisely what I wanted to confess to you, I will simply copy my post here: "I am currently reading an amazing Snape/Hermione fanfic that is incredible so far! If I deem these chapters acceptable by my standards, which are high, I will gladly share my review and the title when I've completed my reading. Presently, I'm making my way through chapter 3 and have only 8 remaining chapters. Talk to you all in a bit!...." Two hours later, I continue. "I didn't expect me to take so long to finish this story, but I highly recommend 'Night Patrol'. You can find this story on adultfanfiction.net in the Harry Potter Het-Snape/Hermione section. Absolutely spectacular! This author can truly write. Her description and intense detail has the reader fully involved with the characters and I found myself mentally scoring points for Severus and/or Hermione. This mental and eventual, but quick to arrive, physical battle between the two is phenomenal. Firstly, I found very few grammatical errors, some of which may have been intentional based or depending on the author's cultural or social upbringing. Their speech in my opinion was completely accurate to the characters and their actions and reactions were appropriate. His/her style of writing was captivating and enthralling and their vocabulary was delicious and vast. Their imagery will have your mind confusing words for motion picture. I have read too many fanfictions in the eight years I have been a devoted reader of Harry Potter creations of all degrees and it is not often I recommend and review elaborately to people who may or may not like this genre. However, this is one of them I will share. Please, if you are not offended by explicit content, read and enjoy this fanfiction. :)"

Superb job!

listen. you need to update asap. Otherwise I will come and make you.

I don't believe it, but I think you just melted my brain, CC. Good gravy...this has got to be the most stimulating fic I've read in like...forever! You MUST archive at TPP or Ashwinder more fans deserve to read this!