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by CryingCinderella

person Addicting Writer
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how this is going so far. Loved the dream bit :D. I got some ideas for you.
1) A sweet and gentle idea about Hermione and Severus on their wedding night. Instead of rough sex, it will be gentle and sweet.
2) Maybe a threesome fantasy that has Hermione, Severus, and Lucius (or Draco, or someone that off sets Severus. I mean, like yin and yang sort of stuff)
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was indeed a close call! I think Hermoine needs to start wearing clothes when she sleeps and reads to him (or at least a better robe), or that Severus should, I dunno... Wake up!! Still, another fantasy won't hurt! I do hope he wakes up soon!
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CC; a wet dream in his coma?!?!?!?!? Oh you are priceless. I do wonder what ever happened to his bathing trucks? Did they wash up on the beach...maybe by the fire?

As to a fantasy request. You know mine by now. A Master/slave (Severus/Hermoine) fantasy with him 'commanding' (making) her do things that she would not normally do.

But you have already given into one of my requests...the body parts reacting to her fantasies. **Bravo, bravo, bravo!**

person Danielle
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved this Ocean fantasy! It's my favorite one yet. My favorites are when Snape is domineering, but not mean. I love a dominant man! And I love your story :)
schedule October 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Deliciously decadent. Loved it! Thank you. The only thing that comes to mind for me fantasy-wise is one where they've been married a couple of years, both are teachers, and work has gotten in the way of their time together. He surprises her with a romantic/loving (for Severus) night that she won't soon forget. ;-)

Thanks again for keeping up with this story! HG4eva
person kathyjo
schedule October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I am so enjoying this story...hoping for an update soon!
person Mary
schedule October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome update... a little on the dark side but hot nontheless. Now, what a dilema... to "help" Severus by giving hima a HAND or just to read. Choices, choices, choices...
On to the next story darling!
person mvsanche
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept, definitely not one I've heard before. I love the way Severus is starting to awaken; can't wait to see what happen when he does!Please write more soon, I can't wait for the next installment.
person Kimi
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Darn it! What a place to end it. One more good story, a bit of touching, and Snape might just pop up from a coma. At least that's what I'm hoping
person Pianita
schedule October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! that was steamy. I am not one to see Severus hurt, but it was the story that got the must reaction from the man in comma! i have to say that submisive Severus is one of my favorite themes; dont they say that a strong controlling person wants to be controled deep down? Perhaps this Severus is one to be seduced by Hermione?
Great story!

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