rate_review Reviews

Excellent characterisation - looking forward to more in this story

This is a horrific tale, although similar to one I've read in Walking the Plank. In that one, Harry is given to collective Death Eaters only Snape fights to be the first, hoping to stall until the Order of the Phoenix arrives. He succeeds but suffers torments as he tries to come to grips with what he did.

I'm sure your story will be equally gripping after such a harrowing start. Only don't keep your readers waiting too long!

pretty good

For a first time Snarry or slash writer, I think you did a wonderful job with this prompt. I would love to see it expanded but you created a real atmosphere of darkness and pain not just for Harry but for Hermione and Ron as well as Snape. I liked that Harry kept fighting. Well done!

will there be another chapter?! It can't just end there!