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by Remarkable

schedule November 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gods Finally! It took him long enough to decide to divorce Molly!

Goodness I'm a whiny little reviewer aren't I? hahahaha

I loved this chapter. Lucius is just a rotten bastard but good ol Sevvy never fails to let the little piece of Gryffindor he has within him shine (gods if Snape saw that nickname he would kill me. Even worse, he would leave my body in pieces around the world if he heard that I thought he had a little bit of Gryffindor within him hahaha).

And believe it or not, I really enjoy your chapters that talk about everything through Arthur's point of view. You have developed his character so well. Hell, I would marry Arthur too--he's such a sweet man but boy does he have a temper! I hope Hermione is on board with him. I might have to strangle her if she isn't!

As always, can't wait for your next chapter! Your stories are like crack to me hahahaha I'm so addicted!

Much Love
Koolgirl18

person Samibear
schedule November 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story until Snape like raped her. Then Malfoy trying to get her to get her to. I was hoping it would get better but its only getting worse.
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhhh!

Really? Your going to leave me with that? After all of the reviews I've ever left you, you're going to make Hermione have Lucius Bloody Malfoy's baby? I protest! I'm going to stand outside on your lawn and picket and not review until you make the story not angsty!

hahahhaha just kidding. It was an appropriate twists but I really was looking forward both Arthur and Hermione kicking ass!

You know what you should do though--you should make it so that Molly was actually having an affair on Arthur as well. Will make the angst a little more interesting. Yes, Molly Weasley having an affair with Kingsley or something like that would really get the fic moving!

Oh what do I know? I'm just a poor college student that's a little too obsessed with Harry Potter fanfiction.

Still, you have me hooked and I can't wait to read more!

Until Then!

Koolgirl18
person kylanSB
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woot chap 12, was hoping for hermione to be more vocal during sex, but i guess the silencio made sense. can't wait for chap 13. cheers for future updates!
schedule November 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Bahhhhh you did it again!

I might have to hold you hostage and force you to write!

Who's child is it? It had better be Arthurs or I might have to kill you (and by that point it wouldn't matter if you didn't finish the story because then I would take over your fic and change it to my liking hahahahaha JK). LOLZ you already know I can't live without this series so I'm willing to wait.

Can't wait to see what happens next!

Much Love
Koolgirl18
schedule October 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I love Arthur and Hermione smut. And I can't wait to see what Arthur does to make Lucius and Snape go away (and even though I'll miss their scenes, they shouldn't fuck with Arthur and Hermione's love). Or better yet, what Hermione does to make them go away.

I know life is busy and updates a far and few in between but I am willing to wait. I hope things start to work out at home and that life become a little more stressful.

Anywho, can't wait for the next chapter!

Much Love
Koolgirl18
person kylanSB
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
very glad to see another update. i don't know if i like the snape and malfoy part more or author. they're all so wonderfully written. can't wait for next chapter!
schedule October 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
person Catstaff
schedule October 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you're still around and updating! And nice to see Hermione and Arthur reconciled, too. I'm still wondering what's up with those unicorns a few chapters back, lol! Anyway, looking forward to more from you, hopefully soon.
schedule July 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm ... dark? No. Hot? OMG YES!!! I just love to see Snape so absolutely dominate and kinky! Gods, the man can shag me in his classroom any time! I would be more than happy to take Hermione's place. hahaha

As much as I love your smut scenes with Lucius and Snape, I miss the Arthur smut scenes. He's such a sweet man and I think he and Hermione deserve each other. I know things get worse before they get better but I seem to be very impatient to get Arthur and Hermione together forever!

And don't worry about the slow updates. I was taking three condensed classes this summer and it was the equivalent of taking five normal classes. RL comes before fanfiction--no matter how much I may want to have faster updates.

As long as you don't abandon and you tell us what's going on, I'm happy :D

Keep up the good work!

Lots of Love
koolgirl18

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