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by pittwitch

schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised (read: jealous) that you can create such a great mood with so few words. (It took me three or four passes to get my flashfic down to the limit.) I can feel Draco's misery as he waited in the foul dungeon. I didn't look at which fandom the story was in so I got the full surprise effect you saved for the last line. For me it's a lot more fun that way.

To put it simply: I like it. :)
person amsev
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How about some more drabbles in this little microcosm you have created. Very nice use of words to evoke the scene!
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh, you did a drabble! Those are sooo hard, but you caught a scene nicely!
person paigeey07
schedule October 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love it!

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