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ahhh very beautiful indeed :D

Um, OK. You might want to put PWP as a warning in the summary. The sex scenes were... entertaining but not graphic and I was deffinately expecting something else when I clicked the link, like possibly plot before rampant hornies.

I would have thought Harry would be more shocked to find out it was Draco, and I think their personalities were lost slightly at the end.
The (from now on Malfoy will be Draco) was not necessary. Subtlety is best, and in many good H/D fics the use of each others given names can be a subconcious challenge for the characters and show the eventual acceptance of each other.
I've read fics before with the Wizard Mail idea, but I think your use of it is far better.
I loved the discription of Draco, I hope you will include more detail in future chapters.
Keep going, this has the potential to be a really great fic. xxx

Woah! Quick and awesome!

That was good I like that. Update is needed thnx