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by grugster

schedule May 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Very intrigued by Hermione's devious plan! I can't wait to read more. I've been out of town so it was awesome to come back to TWO new chapters!!! The reunion w/ Fenrir was super hot, and I can never get enough of them together. I also actually really liked the scene with Ages. Knowing he was showing off for the visitors was kind of hot, actually. :)
person sbrande
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thanking you for thus fantastic story. Just wanted to drop you a line and let you know to keep up the great work as I am loving this story.

Love Sonia :)
person wendy
schedule May 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was awesome! haha I loobe Dorothy. can't wait for the next one :)
schedule May 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Really love this story so far! Can't wait to read more.
Am new to this site and I was wondering is there a way to find out
When you have uploaded a new chapter? X x
person AmberDaze
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just read Just Submit and this story now as well - they are fantastic! Your descriptions make the social structure and wolf way of life totally believable and I can't wait for more!!
schedule May 26, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really like Darius. He's a great character.
person april
schedule May 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:) I'm excited for the next chapter.
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the interaction with the Eldest. It's lots of fun. I really like the direction you're taking this story. I'm anticipating your next chapters with a great deal of glee. I miss Hermione's other mates when she is busy with others. I like the personalities of these mates. I'm very curious about Darius's conclusion.
person Marianne Kret
schedule May 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!!!! Please never stop writing this. All those strong big men are fuel for my daydreaming haha. I always love stories were the characters are driven by animal instincts. So I very much liked the bite Severus gives Hermione at the end of this chapter. I also appriciated the humor. I would like to mention that I'm hoping for a little Fenrir/Yorik action again soon. Havent seen them together for a while now. They were great togheter. And the part were Ages almost reprimands Severus made me interested how that would actualy go between those two. See a little bit more about their relationship. Your work is appriciated and I love reading your stories. Greetings from Holland!
person GuiltyPleasure
schedule May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love Dorothea. She is a great character addition.

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