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by grugster

person Jessica
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Why!Why do you do this to me!!I love this chapter, at first I was just reading and all three good, good. But when I get to the next part with Fenrir and York I was so soooo excited, I have been looking forward to them so long that I had forgot,lol. I am so sad cause I wanted be able to read your story (if you update soon) into next week. :-( <---thats me sad coz I can't wait for the next chapter. oh and I do look forward to so Nev and Draco!Love your work!!!
lol last thing I search high and low and can't find another story as good as your!! Keep it coming
person jessica
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter keep it coming.
person Anon
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM

You Rock,

Please keep going with this wonderful story.

i cannot wait for the next chapter.
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hot sexy and powerful!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOW!
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just finished chapter 17.

ROFL!!!! Hermoine hyperventalating and having to use a paper bag to calm down. And the 'elder' woman with her cane and her attitude...that was just PRICELESS!
person sbrande
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent chapter. I am following this story closely as I am enjoying it immensely.

Love Sonia :)
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hot, hot, and oh so damn HOT!!!

It got hot in here the moment Yorik tossed Hermoine over his shoulder and didn't start to cool down until I started writing this review. This was a wonderful chapter.

Thank you so much. More...please.
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Is it hot in here or is it just me?
person circe266
schedule March 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Gah, that is so freaking hot, Fenrir dominating Yorik while Yorik takes Hermione, all at Hermione's request. I only wish that the chapter hadn't ended where it did! Even though Yorik isn't always the most sensitive werewolf, I hope he recognizes and shows his appreciation for how Hermione makes his secret desires come true.

Re: the earlier part of the chapter, please don't have Hermione sleep with another old geezer -- I don't think that my gag reflex has recovered from the last encounter with Ages a couple chapters ago. My fingers are crossed that once she finishes her sexy encounter with Fenrir and Yorik, she will have a go at Radgar.

Thank you for posting another great chapter!
schedule March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great stories. Really enjoy them. I'm a bit confused as to where Roland is in the hierarchy?

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